Showing posts with label Slash. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Slash. Show all posts

March 22, 2012

Recommendation: Pretty in Pink by @Fr333Bird

Ever wanted to see Riley hook up with Emmett? Yeah, I didn't see it either, but it's like a cupcake you didn't realize you wanted til you see the pretty pink frosting on the chocolate mound. You have to have it.


I fell in love with these boys from the first paragraph. Riley is such a fun character and the way he tortures Emmett is just divine. It's light and quick and a very fun read. I highly encourage the slash girls to get with Pretty in Pink. Even if you aren't a hardcore slashy, you'll love this story. It's just adroable and sweet and delicious! Tell Fr333Bird that I sent you!
<3, Rain

December 16, 2011

Buon Anno, a story for @TwisteIn_

Beautiful Banner made by TwistedIn!

A/N: So once again TwistedIn_ gave me a challenge. She was looking for something cute and fluffy with boy kisses.
I hope you like it!

Disclaimer: I own nothing. I just have a muse who helps me play with these fun characters.





"We're going to play spin the bottle!"

"No, we're not." I glare at my prancing sister.

"Oh, yes. You said you'd let me have a New Year's party and pretend to enjoy yourself. Pretend better, Jasper." She pouts. I hate when she pouts.

"Alice... the reason I said I wouldn't rat you out on this party was because I'm the best brother on the planet. I did not rat you out so that you could hornball around and try to make out with everyone at the party."

"Not everyone..."

"Alice?"

She huffs. "Okay, so I would like to try a few things, don't judge me."

"Why don't you just ask them to kiss you? You're a cute girl, I'm sure most of them would."

"Because I'm not a slut."

"Yes, you are." She is. She'll make out with anything with a tongue. She's like my polar opposite, straight down to being born with black hair instead of blonde like mine. The only way you know we're related is the green color of our eyes we share. Other than that, we don't have much in common, but I love my crazy little sister very much.

"You're just jealous because you're a nun." She tries to level me with her angry look, but her little button nose removes any fear I could muster.

"A monk. Girls are nuns."

"Like I said, you're a nun." We have talked several times about why I don't make out with every girl who throws themselves at me. My sister accepts me for who I am, opposite and all. She knows who I like and why I've not done anything about it, and yet, she still likes to jerk my chain.

"Don't make me throttle you?"

"I'm so scared." She waves her hands dismissively. "I bet I can still out run you."

"Seriously, Ali... spin the bottle? How are you going to convince everyone else to go along with you?"

"Jasper, we're teenagers. Believe me; I won't have a very hard time convincing anyone." She winks and spins away.

Swaggering her way out to the living room, she raises her arm with the bottle tequila above her head.

"Who wants a shot?" I hear her yell out as the kitchen door swings behind her.

"Apparently, we'll be having shots," I say to myself.

I grab another beer and then walk into the living room. It smells like dying pine and spilled beer. There are dozens of people milling around and I know there are more out on the deck. How my sister knows this many people, I have no idea. She's never met a stranger so I guess it makes sense.

"Come on, Jasper."

There sits my devil of a sister, surrounded by several of her girlfriends and half-a-dozen guys.

How did I get myself in this situation? I don't want to kiss anyone. No, that's not true. I don't want to kiss any of the girls sitting in that circle eyeing me like dinner after a fast.

I settle myself down beside Alice knowing that I will have a hell of a psychologist bill someday. I'm playing spin the bottle with my little sister, a bunch of girls I'm not attracted to, some guys from my soccer team, and him.

Edward Cullen.

I've wanted him since the day he wandered into the lunchroom on his first day this year. I wanted to immediately swoop in and show him around, be that guy. I barely managed a smile when he grinned at me after I picked up the pencil he dropped during biology. Trying repeatedly to muster up the courage to talk to him I failed every time. He was beautiful and smart and straight.

And I was just the pathetically-in-the-closet boy who lusted after him.




"Edward?"

I look over in time to see Chelsea lean forward in her very low cut top.

"Could you scoot over?"

"Sure, sorry." Shifting down puts me right in front of Alice, the hostess for the evening. She's prattling on to Emmett about the rules of Spin the Bottle. I thought the rule was to spin the bottle, apparently I was wrong. She keeps saying "You kiss whomever the bottle points to, no matter what."

He laughs and says, "If the bottle points me to sausage, I'm tappin' out."

"I'll kiss your boys, then," she says with a smirk.

"Who won't you kiss, Alice?" Emmett's girlfriend, Rosalie, says from beside Emmett.

"My brother," she says matter-of-factly as she points to Jasper.

Fucking hell, he looks good.

He's wearing jeans and a button down. His hair is its usual curly mess. My fingers twitch just looking at him. What I wouldn't give to touch him.

Since I met him in biology, I've wanted to talk to him. But he's so shy. So quiet. Anytime I tried to get his attention, dropping my pencil by his desk, bumping into him in the hall, no matter what I tried, he'd duck his head and disappear as fast as he could behind a book or into the crowd. Eventually, I just gave up. He obviously wasn't interested. Maybe someday I would find a boy who was as interested in me as I was in them. Only five more months until graduation then I'll be off to university and out of the closet.

I watch as Alice spins the bottle with gusto. She squeals when it lands on Bella, the Italian exchange student.
Alice settles herself on all fours and licks her lips.

"La bacio?" Bella asks.

"Si. Kiss Alice." Kate, the girl she's staying with, replies. Kate spent a year with Bella's family in Italy, and now Bella's staying here with her. I think Kate got the better end of the deal. Bella shyly smiles and leans forward into the circle as little Alice practically pounces. When they kiss, I hear several groans. I'm not sure what the big deal is, but as soon as their lips meet, you would think it was a solar eclipse.
Alice gets a little carried away and I see her brother turn neon red. He's cute when he blushes. Rose finally yanks Alice away and chides her for being a kissing whore.
Bella laughs sweetly and whispers to Kate, "E'stato così buono." Remembering my Italian from last year's class, she seems to have liked the kiss, too.

Alice smiles at Bella with reddened cheeks similar to her brother's. Maybe I'm not the only gay kid in the room after all. It looks like Alice very much enjoyed herself.
Kate explains to Bella that it's her turn to spin, so she does with a big grin, all the while smiling at Alice. The bottle lands on me and I inwardly curse centrifugal force.
Bella's disappointment is brief as a catcall sounds from Emmett and I lean forward as quickly as humanly possible to kiss her. She tastes like cherry coke.

"Your turn, Eddie." I want to junk-punch Emmett. He chucks the half empty bottle of tequila at me and then does another shot. I look across the circle trying not to look like I'm gawking at Edward. I notice Alice is reapplying her cherry chapstick and eyeing Peter. Sweet lord, that girl has never met a stranger.

Looking around the circle I swallow hard. Jessica, Lauren, Chelsea, and Irina are all making eyes at me. If I didn't know any better, I'd think they were trying to get me to point the bottle at them on purpose.

Fuck that.

I pour myself a preemptive shot. Please don't land on a girl, I chant over and over to myself.

Spinning with as much oomph as I can, I am kind of hoping it will land on me so I can do another shot and get the hell out of here. I promised Alice I'd stay until midnight and it's nearly that.
Time stops as I see the tip of the bottle rotate around the circle repeatedly. The din of the party slowly fades into the distance as I watch the bottle settle. Following the bottle, I raise my eyes. They lead me to criss-crossed blue jean clad legs and a blue cotton button down with the sleeves rolled up on toned arms. My eyes glance along the blonde hair sprinkled along the forearms that lead up to muscled arms and broad shoulders. Finally, my eyes land on a beautiful face with full, pouting lips, a stubbled jaw, and shocked, bright blue eyes.
I watch as his Adam's apple bobs with a deep swallow. He looks nervous, but a hint of a smile plays at his lips. Maybe he thinks I'll chicken out or he's praying I won't make Alice kiss him.
Emmett's making a joke about chapstick and I swear I hear a feminine voice curse. I know I should back down, I know I should do the shot and run, but this is my one chance.
I've wanted to kiss this guy since the moment I saw him and here I sit with a bottle of tequila pointing at him, giving me permission to take what I want.
Then I realize he's sitting up on his knees. He's coming to me.

I shift onto my knees and put my hands on either side of the bottle to push myself up. We both shuffle together on our knees until the bottle is between my knees and he's kneeling in front of me.

Nothing else matters as I watch him lick his lips, his eyes trained on mine. Putting my hand on his neck, curling my fingers, I lean forward to take my chance. He leans in toward me and closes his eyes. When my lips touch his, my eyes drift closed and I take a deep inhale through my nose. His scent is faintly sweet with a little salty nip. His full bottom lip is between mine and I open my mouth, my tongue lightly peeking out to taste him.

I hear him groan and his hand reaches out, finding my hand and hooking his fingers into mine. My hands lock into his hair, gripping him tightly and I breathe deeply, struggling to keep my wits as the world swirls around me. It's too much-his smell, his taste, his touch-yet, it's not enough. I feel my heart pounding hard against my ribs and a wash of dizziness. I have to pull away to catch my breath, but I don't want to let go.

He doesn't pull back right away when I do and I can see his mouth slightly parted, his body leaning toward mine. Half a second later, his eyes pop open and he registers what has happened. Glancing down, I can see a bulge in his pants that matches my own and I quirk an eyebrow at him. His cheeks are already flushed but his lips curl into a slow grin.

"That... was fucking hot." My reverie is broken by Rosalie's voice.

"Holy shit." Emmett and Rosalie were made for each other. "Where did that come from?"

"Now I know why people watch porn," I hear Kate say in a mock whisper to Alice who is beaming like a proud retriever.

"Stupefacente," Bella murmurs. Amazing, indeed.

Sitting back with a laugh, I shift to try to cover my erection. It's a lesson in futility. My eyes roam the circle trying not to land on Jasper, but I can't help but look to see if he's freaking out. The bottle sits in the middle of the circle still pointing at him.

"I need a drink," he says and scrambles away from the circle.

"It's your turn!" Alice calls after him, but he just yells for her to take it. She smiles happily and spins again laughing when it lands on Emmett, who rubs his hands together like he's just been told he gets a second ice cream cone.

When everyone's laughing at Emmett's show of putting on Alice's chapstick, I sneak away to the kitchen.




He kissed me. Edward kissed me. And I don't think he hated it.

I know I didn't hate it.

Shifting myself in my jeans, I try to will my cock to behave. Shit, that was hot.

I grab another beer out of the fridge.

"You okay?" His voice is honey drifting on the air.

"Sure." I pop up with my beer and offer him one. What does he want me to say?

"Thanks." He takes the beer, pulling the top off and slugging down several long pulls. Standing dumbfounded, I was the muscles in his neck as he swallows.

"So, that was not something I've done before." I am so stupid.

"Really?" He looks genuinely shocked. "You're good at it."

I don't respond. My brain can't seem to catch up to the situation.

"Are you sure you're okay, Jasper?"

I nod stupidly.

He takes another slow sip and then takes a step toward me.

His fingers wrap around my wrist. In the background I can hear the crowd in the living room counting down. "Jasper?"

"Yeah?" Is my witty reply. He's moving closer and I can't say I'm unhappy about it. The people in the living room begin to holler and cheer, yelling "Happy New Year!"

"May I?" He asks as he dips his head slightly.

Whatever he wants, I'll give.

"Please?" I beg as his lips softly touch mine.

Our lips meet and his body presses against mine. He feels strong and lithe, his hands weaving themselves into my hair. He tugs slightly and I open up to him allowing his tongue into my mouth. Tasting him now is even better than I had imagined and my arms wrap around his neck to pull him into me more. I don't want to let go. Ever.

We stay locked in our kiss until we're jerked apart by a crash from the living room and I hear Alice telling Tyler he's paying for our mother's lamp.

Groaning, I pull away with regret, but smile when he grins down at me.

"Happy New Year, Jasper."

As Auld Lang Syne plays from the living room, I raise myself up on my toes and whisper "Buon Anno" before I capture his lips with mine

Deepening the kiss and tucking my hands into his hair I think, It will be now.




E/N: I hope you enjoyed this little goodie. Let me know what you think!
And I hope all of you have wonderful holiday kisses!

August 29, 2011

Rec of the Week over at @IndieFicPimp Paper Moon by @MsKathy

If you didn't get a chance to read it yet, I wrote a review of Paper Moon by MsKathy of The Trip Home fame.



Thank you to the girls at IFP for letting me play with the big dogs.

April 3, 2011

Need Jacob and Edward Slash?

Then step right on up to If Only by SadTomato

Sweet baby jebus this is a good story.

I first ran into it via KellyProvence. She said it would do me right, when I was lookin' for something angsty. It is indeed angsty in the beginning. Then it turns FUCKawesome. Stress on the FUCK important here.
It starts out slow and awkward...

confusing and intense... the intensity doesn't let up and it just grows!

Slashy goodness all over this thing. Don't get me wrong... there is emotion, there is plot, there is connection!


And then there's bangin', hard. :)

And you know how Rain like her slash hard yes? Mmmmm... ST did not disappoint here my friends.

But overall, this story just grips your heart and makes you smile and all swoony. Seriously good people.

If you are looking for something emotional and hot, please go check here out.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6806833/1/If_Only

November 5, 2010

Fandom for Preemies!

Hello lovelies.
I know I'm not supposed to be blogging whilst NaNo is afoot, but I wanted to let you all know about a great cause with some fun for you!
Fandom for Preemies is a great lil ditty by my girl AydenMorgen and her team. They've compiled over a hundred authors, one shots, outtakes, etc. They are all in a pretty lil package for a donation to the March of Dimes.
Yours truly and Mistress Skeezon of Fortune's Fool and Open Mic Night fame have a one shot called "Say Good Bye to Your Heart Tonight" starring Starlett-ella and Fangirl-ice :) Its a good one if I do say so myself!
Check it out at- http://fandomforpreemies.blogspot.com/
Please donate, save some babies, tweet this out to your tweeps or post on your blogs please!!! You do some good and you get some smut, what better combo is that yeah?

October 25, 2010

Slashy fun manga give away!!!

My girl KF is givin away some fun stuff over on her blog, I loves checkin her stuff out, I encourage you to do the same!
http://kerry-freeman.blogspot.com
GO, NOW! Tell her I sent ya!

October 23, 2010

In honor of Raw and Rosy and my love, TuesdayMidnight

So I have a sad.

I have immensely enjoyed my friend TuesdayMidnight’s story about two outsiders of different breeds who collide- one arrogant and rebellious, the other a lonely genius and their explosive relationship that forms from a need for release which turns into a powerful symbiotic coupling between two strong male figures.
Raw and Rosy is beautifully erotic and scripted with a unique perspective on such a complex relationship. The characterization and plot is a fantasy mixture of romance, erotica, BDSM, and as TM so lovingly calls it Porn with Plot.
It started as a kink meme, a request by an anonymous fic-er that wanted a spankfic, someone wanted Edward to need a good punishing. TuesdayMidnight took this kinkyfuckery and brought it to the fandom with gusto, glory, and gluttonous, gratuitous eroticism. Simply primal and simply beautiful. A lust-hate relationship at it’s very best.
Jasper’s dominance and menacing sexuality is titillating and intense:
"The words came out without my really thinking them over. "I take care of what's mine. Your ass is mine now, Cullen." I ended the statement with a growl, and Edward once again responded with a flush.
"I still don't like you," he stated, but his eye twinkled as he spoke.
"I still don't like you, either," I agreed."
Another one of my favorite scenes from the complicated and delicious Spanksper:
“"Oh, God!" Edward screeched.
"The name's Jasper, you slut, but I'll allow the comparison."
I pulled out almost all the way again and thrust back in.”
Edward makes my heart thud just as much as Jasper:
The intensity of his gaze was so powerful, I almost had to look away.
I knew now, despite any previous fears, that Jasper would never intentionally hurt me.
I hardly paid attention to my own reactions. The way I whimpered and became completely unraveled was surreal. It was hard to believe that was me.

I asked my twitter followers and Twives about why they loved RnR and here are some of their responses.
NondiRochelle – “I love Raw & Rosy because its so different. Jasper in R&R is one of my favorite characters. He's so complex. Plus it’s hot. Lol”
AFragileLittleHuman- Her reaction to the first chapter- “Oh, dear God *swoon* *thud*”
She has nearly three thousand reviews, and deserves every single panting, squeeing, moaning compliment.
My absolutely favorite part (which is hard to say since the whole thing makes my heart beat faster and my pulse quicken and gets my husband laid quite often) is the kiss-
“I had never noticed before how shockingly green his eyes were. Maybe it was that the sun had finally decided to make an appearance and was streaming through the narrow window, but there they were, digging into my soul, bright and sparkling.
It was then that I realized, through all of this, that I had never kissed him. I had fucked him into oblivion. I had had my lips around his cock and my tongue in his ass. I had spanked him, paddled him, handcuffed him to his bed and had even taken a cane to his willing body, but I had never once pressed my lips to his.
But his lips were right there. Full and slightly parted, as if he was waiting for me make the first move.
I closed my eyes.
"Do you want this?" I whispered.
I could only ever give him what he wanted.
"I think so," he whispered back…
I pressed my lips to his gently. The first thing I noticed was that he tasted delicious. He was the type of guy who used chapstick, and there was a residual minty flavor on his lips that was only slightly masking his own sweet taste.
I took his bottom lip between mine and sucked slightly. It was soft and pliable and warm. I couldn't remember the last time I actually kissed someone. Did lips always feel this good?
Then he parted them slightly and my whole body reacted.
More! More! More!
I was on fire, burning with need. My dick always responded to Edward, but this was completely different from every time before.
His tongue entered my mouth and I pressed mine against it. They teased each other, pushing and pulling, giving and taking. His lips were hot and searing against mine, and I just could not get enough. My hands drifted up on their own accord and plunged into his coppery mess. I tugged a little, eliciting a moan that vibrated against my mouth, only to be stifled by my probing tongue.
His hands were clawing at my back, urging me on.
I dominated him sexually, but at this we were equals. He kissed back with equal fervor and for a moment, I just let that fire consume me.
Why had I not done this before?
His tongue continued to lap at my own. Inside my mouth, inside his mouth, our lips still moved in perfect tandem. When he would go right, I would go left, our noses never knocking, our teeth never mashing. He brought a hand up to run it through my hair as I brought my hands down, pulling him ever closer to me.
I was completely and utterly lost under his spell.
It was only when I noticed my lips were starting to go numb that I realized we were both gasping in need of oxygen. I pulled away.
"Shit," I panted, completely out of breath.
Edward had leaned his head back against the wall, his eyes were closed and he looked absolutely blissful.
"Mmm hmm," he murmured.
I needed to do something to regain control of the situation, but my mind was frozen. I just kissed Edward fucking Cullen and it was the best kiss I'd ever had. In fact, I'm pretty sure it was the best kiss I was ever going to have in my entire life. My whole body was humming.
I couldn't think of anything I could do to fix it.”
My very first reaction to this story was “*picks self up off of floor* Holy Mary Mother of Slash! You are a slashy fcuking genius and I heart you, hard. Pun intended!”
I still mean every syllable.
I will always love this story because I bonded with my friends over it. I have several lovely ladies I call my Twives or my TwiNesties and many of us love this story. We have discussions about it and picspam about it and when we all met in Las Vegas, TM updated R&R. I can remember sitting with five of my closest friends at a bar at the NY, NY Casino all reading it on our phones.
I even sat on the floor of my dear sweet SuperstarNanna’s living room with her and read over her shoulder chapter 16. We both had stupid grins on our faces and left a joint review.
Spanksper and Assward, as they are so lovingly called by the fandom, are beloved and incredible and will be missed. We still have the outtakes and R&R Revisited to enjoy though.
Viva la Spankfic!
Love you TM! Thank you for sharing your boys with us.
PS- If you'd like to leave a review or a good-bye to TM and her boys, please do! We'd love to hear what you think of the story as well!


September 22, 2010

White Blaze to Lone Star


White Blaze to Lone Star by ArcadianMaggie

Ummm.... yes please!

I found this fic on accident, trolling through some pics from RMHale and found her reference a cute boy pic like above and said it was for ArcadianMaggie's Lone Star. I then went to Twitter like a stalker to see who AM was and then looked at her FFn page. Low and behold, there's this fic about Ed camping with Em and Rose and then running into adorable Texan and lone camper, Jasper.
Enter Fuckawesome Lemon.
The chemistry is fantastic between these two. It's quick and wonderful and passionate. The only thing I could say about WBtLS to make it better would be PLEASE CONTINUE IT MAGGIE!!!

I've already asked her to and she said when she's finished with what she's working on now, she might take it back up and add outtakes. This would make me verra, verra happy.

One of my favorite parts of the story is when Pre Med Ed and Lonesome Star end up at a Mexican cantina before they spend the night in town:

"Over the course of dinner we ended up having several more margaritas apiece. I was feeling buzzed as we relaxed after our meal, laughing and talking and telling stories. I had had such a great time at dinner with him. I didn't really want the evening to end. I especially didn't want him to leave tomorrow. I stared at Jasper, watching his tongue lick the salt off the edge of the margarita glass. I was enthralled, seeing that pink tip slide across the rim of the glass then disappear behind those full pouty lips. The corners of his mouth turned up. Fuck he had a sexy smile.

He was grinning, his eyes sparkling and those adorable dimples showing on his cheeks. "Your smile's pretty fucking sexy too," he said.

I was confused for a minute then realized I must have said that out loud. Fuck I was drunk. I laughed because, really, what the fuck else could I do. I had just been caught eye fucking his mouth."


Edward is adorkable as the high strung med student looking for zen in the trails of America. Jasper makes your heart beat faster with his relaxed drawl and cute little quips. I highly recommend this story as a quickie. It's beautifully written, the setting descriptions almost make me want to go hiking, and my husband got lucky after I read it too.

All around A+!!! Go read it and tell Maggie that The Rain Girl sent you!

September 18, 2010

My new fave slashy...


Ohmigoodgod.

Mergers and Acquisitions.... wow.

Okay so Touchstone67 and Domward's Mistress have teamed up to write a JPoV and EPoV respectively and it is FUCKawesome.

I describe it lovingly to my ficfriends as Pretty Woman meets Twilight and has Brokeback babies.

This story has it all.
Yes, of course there is smut and lemonrific good times, BUT it also has this incredible emotional undercurrent that grips your heart and pulls you along kicking and screaming and at other times you are scrolling so fast your eyes hurt and your wrist is aching like you are doing something else.

As soon as he was gone, I went back to the shower, letting the hot water soothe my muscles that ached from the various positions he had put me in. Jacob was, without a doubt, the best lover I had ever had, not that I had many to compare him too but he was definitely experienced and very talented.

Even though, I still wasn't fully satisfied. I wanted my shower fantasy, which he had tried to give me but it still wasn't right, it wasn't what I wanted.

Or rather, who I wanted.

I wanted blond waves bouncing as water rolled down lean shoulders.

I wanted blue eyes staring up at me through thick lashes.

I wanted full lips locked around my cock.

Stepping out of the shower, I wrapped a towel around my waist and headed for the desk in the bedroom, powering on my laptop as I grabbed the card for Denali Escorts out of my wallet. I typed in the web address, butterflies forming in my stomach as I clinked on the link titled 'View Our Models'. Laughing a bit at the term 'model', I wondered why they had chosen to pretty up the term 'escort', although it was better than 'hooker'. A list of men and women appeared on my screen with a small thumbnail picture next to a name and age.

Ivana: age 22

Brittany: age 21

Michael: age 24

Jasper: age 20

Natasha: age 19

I scrolled through the names and pictures, searching for anyone that fit the description I desired. Finally, I came back around to the unique name of Jasper. They apparently used aliases to keep their identity private.

I couldn't tell much from the thumbnail they had posted next to his name. Clicking the image, I couldn't contain my gasp of shock when a large photo loaded on my screen.

It was him.

These little tugs at your curiosity and heart strings make you whimper and whine while you read. I find myself, especially when Jasper is recalling his childhood, just swallowing hard over and over trying to will away the sadness.
My parents had brought me to church when I was young, teaching me about God, Heaven and the power of prayer.

I didn't pray.

I didn't believe in God.

And if there was a Hell, surely I was in it.

It's the same when Edward talks about his family's expectations of him:

Sadness clutched my heart, battling the happy swell as it felt ready to burst from the conflicted emotions.

My parents had given me everything, and I could not disappoint them by being gay. It was to be my secret alone, something I would have to bury deep inside me, denying myself the pleasure of another's touch and love.

I was expected to graduate, go to college, work for my father, get married, have children and start the vicious cycle all over again. I would do what I was expected to do.

It really hurts to think about what Esme and Carlisle and even Alice put Edward through and what he allows himself to be put through in this story. He is truly the martyr for the good of his family and it's beautiful and painful and frustrating. You know why he does it, but you always wanna slap him a few times.
The same with Jasper. He's so damaged, but so striking in his strength. All the things he's gone through. He finds solace in these compelling supporting characters- Riley, then Peter, and he finds his paradise lost in Edward. You know where he belongs, but you see he can't quite get there. There is always something stopping him and you know why he doesn't go after it just like with Edward, but you still want to smack them. Then hug them.

The lemons are pretty damned awesome too, here's just a snippet of one of my faves that had me panting like a dog in heat:

His trembling turned into full blown shaking as he gripped my hips so hard I was sure I would have bruises, he stayed completely still for several moments before his hands finally loosened, his eyes meeting mine again and the look they held was positively feral.

Fusing his mouth to my neck once more, he rocked his hips, sliding out most of the way before slamming into me again, my breath leaving me in a rush at the brutal movement. It all felt so damn good. Wrapping both of my arms around his neck, I held on to him tightly, keeping us so close together that my cock would need absolutely no stimulation from his hand as his hard stomach rubbed against it and his cock hit my prostate with every deep thrust.

"You feel so fucking good, Edward...so, so good," he grunted, his lips finally reaching mine again. Our tongues twisted as his hard thrusts continued, bringing me closer and closer to the sweet release I craved so terribly. There was no way I was going to last long, my muscles already tensing repeatedly as my rigid erection left a slick trail of precum on us.

"Don't stop...don't...ever...fucking...stop," I babbled, rolling my hips to meet his thrusts.

"Never," he vowed, sliding his hands up to my ribs and grasping hard. Regardless of his statement mere moments before, he grimaced and slowed his hips almost to a stop. "I'm close," he whispered apologetically.

"Oh, God, me too...I'm so close, Jasper. Make me come."

This story is an incredible battle of emotions. The passion and anguish is incredibly done. Touchstone and MistressD do an amazing job.

On a vibrating scale of one to ten, this is an 11. 12 even.
My girl ACRCullen first sent me over there. She KNOWS I hate to read WIPs but told me to GO since I adore good slash and poly. I am never gonna doubt her again. This story has a lot of the emotional tug that The Trip Home had, but there's something more, something so deep. It grips you completely.

The only thing I can think of that would make this story better would be if Edward got a lil tougher and maybe got to top! OR- a Peter/Jasper/Edward poly outtake... jussayin.


If you dig slash, and maybe if you don't, this story is so stunning and so vibrant. I truly recommend it.

Please go see the girls and Escortsper and Businessmanward at http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5654185/1/Mergers_and_Acquisitions

You won't regret it. Tell them RainGirl sent you :)